I Suppose - A Remus/Sirius Story

[SiriuslyAsian]

Title: I Suppose
Story Length: VERY VERY short
Pairing: Remus X Sirius
Author: PandaFusion (Myself)
Link: www.fanfiction.net/s/3658625/1/I_Suppose
Summary: A cute little bit of Remus X Sirius fluff with some firewhiskey involved! (Not a Oneshot anymore...)

I know it's really short, but any comments/criticism is appreciated. I've gotten stuck in this weird POV writing style, so any tips on how to break out of it are appreciated. (If you read my other stories, you'll see what I mean!) Thanks!

[Angelic Girl]

Oh my goodness, I was laughing through the entire thing. Hehehehe. I'm not a fan of slash fanfic usually, but that was funny. LOL. Have you thought of adding to it so that its longer?

[SiriuslyAsian]

I've considered it. I'm thinking of doing Sirius trying to explain his actions, where instead of being normal, he tries to turn on the charm and starts acting a bit thingyy, and then Remus gets his revenge. I have trouble making them long though... no matter what I do, my stories always end up short and in that weird style with lots of spacing and almost no dialogue...

[Angelic Girl]

Hrm, well it was funny. ;D I know what you mean about short stories--I generally write Star Trek fanfic and all of mind die at like four pages. I don't know why. I think I just don't know how to end it or what. LOL. I should try my hand at HP fanfic. I generally role-play it on my HP forum. =]

[SiriuslyAsian]

Which forum? The Marauder one that you have in your sig?

[Angelic Girl]

Yepperz ;D I'm a role-play addict, especially when it comes to Harry Potter and Sci-Fi stuff.

[SiriuslyAsian]

I'm going to start a thread somewhere else where we can talk about role-playing, because I don't want anything to make this thread locked or something. Just look for it, 'kay? TTYS!

[Angelic Girl]

Okay, I was just about to suggest the same thing actually. Hehehe.